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Submitted: November 24, 2012
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Comic 1-Adrian meets Noelleby ~GrisselleR

Cartoons & Comics / Digital Media / Comics / Pages

You can’t live the way Adrian lives without making a few enemies and even though this is really short and out of context, Adrian first begins to come to her senses when she “meets” Noelle. Though she might have to take a bullet or two first.
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You can view the full version here: [link]

Oh and also, this is my first try at anything even resembling a comic so be gentle but critical if you like!

PS Thank you all for the recommendations! I know what I'll be doing this winter break!

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~panigirl Nov 27, 2012 Student

this is really good! i think you have an intuitive sense of image choice! if it were me, i would give the panels a bit more room in between them, but that may be a stylistic choice!
your art is beautiful as usual~

~sam123granger Nov 25, 2012 Hobbyist Writer

adrian has a patter on the inside of her cape in the 3rd to last panel but none on the 2nd panel. Just thought you ought to know! Besides that i love it, i'm really excited for you story it's so creative.

~jurodo Nov 25, 2012 Hobbyist Traditional Artist

*dies* This is beautiful. I love it!

~Bella-Dean Nov 25, 2012

Tthis is really interesting so far. I love the colors you picked for it. With Adrian and Aziri's communicating, you might want to go with a different sort of bubble. Like you have the thought bubbles and speech bubbles, so maybe a telepathic bubble would work better. I don't make comics though so I could be totally off on that.